Friday, October 16, 2009

My Country In Peril Comments

Rating: 3.3

Some evils have occupied my country,
And have divided it by a boundary.
My country is entangled in the jaws of corruption,
Which is leading to its destruction.
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gautam sharma
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Omar Ibrahim 22 October 2009

oh i can't believe! ! ! ! hey man it's INDIA! ! ....INDIA......it's from the greatest countries in the world! ! ! ........don't change my mind about INDIA.....i love it very much....even if there are many problems there...but i love it just like i love egypt......anyways it's a great poem.....i hope i can write like you one day.....and i hope my country will be like INDIA.....

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 17 October 2009

wonderful! I say 'SOBRESALIENTE' the word means so many meanings but has one synonym called 'BEST'

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 16 October 2009

An excellent piece of work

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Rajaram Ramachandran 16 October 2009

Outside people are jealous about India, where we stand united despite different languages, religions, castes and creeds. Unity in diversity. That is why they want to create disturbances to our country's peaceful atmosphere. But we will not mind them and we will still stand united against our enemies.

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a powerful poem filled by some of the truth..well said

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Obinna Eruchie 16 October 2009

Similar to what is happening in my country and other countries in the world.

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Marilyn Lott 16 October 2009

You obviously love your country very much and are sending out a plea for help. I hope something changes so your country can get that help. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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