Tuesday, November 8, 2016

My Corrupt Uncles Comments

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When I was born,
in conditions that were not ideal for my survival,
everyone thought I shall not survive.
I was a weak baby,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 08 November 2016

A great metaphor, I think it's a story of corrupt leaders of Pakistan............................................

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Spock The Vegan 08 November 2016

People in my wife's family went through similar trials. God be with you.

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James Mclain 08 November 2016

They tried their best to kill their guilt, trapped in their guilt you survived.. iip

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 November 2016

Really you have gone through a lot in life. Where should one go to when own people turn foes. Hope you are doing fine now. Nice poem.

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