My Coral Island Comments

A lone mango tree finds reflections In the stillness of cool pond counting the blooms on its branches...lovely poetic expression. An excellent poem dear poetess. Stay always happy and blessed!

The stillness and the serenity captured in your words. Very peaceful.

Beautiful depiction of coral island with the mango tree bearing fruits to offer the travellers and with the cookos to provide songs for their pleasure. Wonderful imagery. Any one will appreciate this poem for its sweetness. Thank u dear Bharati madam for posting this lovely poem.

How the mango tree fulfills its mission of making others happy by offering its fruits.... an indirect hint that we should also produce fruits, if our existence has to be meaningful. The mango tree is set in an idyllic back ground...! A beautiful image!

yes, kind of dreamy. do mangoes ever hit travelers on the head? bri :) aka brian

Your poem is so beautiful that I wish to visit the amazing coral island.

It's only in the last lines you refer to a human presence. Otherwise natural things go through their existence just as they have for countless eons. This poem celebrates nature for its own sake until the travelers savor the mango fruit at the end. I hope they fully appreciate the sweet wonder of the world they inhabit. Your poem beautifully and memorably conveys such gratitude.

Counting the blooms of nature. Nice piece. Thanks for sharing.

Thank you d.ear Sanjukta for your appreciation

What a portrayal of natural beauty in the first stanza! awesome artistry. and the last stanza is full of hopes. mind soothing poem.

Beautiful write. 'A lone mango tree, finds reflections in the stillness of cool pond counting the blooms on its branches and the seasons passed with cuckoos.' is superb.wish I could write such nice words.Much love.