My Conversation Withapoem. Comments

Highly impressive and flawless, a nice craft.

You always seem unreachable You come near but When I extend my hand You disappear.....Loved the philosophy of the poetess. A wonderful write. Top score and to my favourite.

Sometimes you are apparent Sometimes hide in a veil. When I extend my hand.. You disappear.... //.... The mysticism of a poet's world nicely interpreted. The hand behind it is so unpredictable. Sometimes it comes without effort with its graceful presence to write down a composition. Thanks.

I so relate to the close of this poem, Bharati. Yes, we are graced with poems when mere effort on our part can produce not a line worth saving. -Glen

I'm sure it depends on the poet, but this seems to say YOUR poems are quite varied in content, & in the amount of ease or difficulty you have in composing them. Your title (the 'Withapoem') i think shows that PH has once more been up to its tricks! To MyPoemList. bri :)

Secrets! ! Hidden pains of love and life. 🤗 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

The uncertainity of the flow of poetry is sometimes painful. When we want to embrace a charming poetry it slips away and when we never think of it it comes to us like a beautiful sight in a dream. " But you surprise Me ofte With your suddennessWhen you come without effortAnd oblige me With your Graceful presence"

Beautiful expressions. The whimsical nature of our muse is so enchanting and so well experienced by all. Wether she is there or not we just have to love her.

Beautifully expressed dear friend! All you have said about the poem is so correct! This is a universal experience of most of the poets! Aptly enumerated! A sure 10

'When you come without effort' - To me too, when poetry come, they come like that. A nice poetic conversation with a poem.

Love the structure of this poem then I love that you change that structure letting this poem breathe and fly and sing as it changes its vision. Lovely in that unique Bharati way you have with words and meaningfulness! 10++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list

Poetry is so wonderful. sometimes it comes near and disappear at once, sometimes stay near for long, sometimes hangs like dreams. You have described the approach of poetry and its manifestation...10

Not to speak is terrible, but this graceful presence, as result of your coversation with a poem, is tenfold better, Congratulations with your brand-new poem, dear poetess! A 10 and much much more for the poem.

Lovely conversation with a poem and very aptly described... And like you I also read, even repeat reading some poems from your book, , , just as you dig out some old poems from the old. It is good not to upload a new poem.... all the best

O Poem You are my self talk My secrets, untold My pains, hidden My laughter, repressed My dreams, unrealized My fears, lurking My stories, unfolding.....excellent poem writing; poem is life, breath, veins everything for poet; superbly expressed the theme; pleasure to read

You are in lines and words In stanzas or in unfinished paragraphs Sometimes you are apparent Sometimes hide in a veil.......nice envision. A beautiful poem is well executed. Thanks for sharing.

I also get writers block and sometimes a poem writes itself