Saturday, December 7, 2019

My Confession Comments

Rating: 5.0

I learned how to spare my two useful long forelegs,
I came in this world as an intelligent four footed king,
Spared my legs for love and I'm proud of this sparing,
I taught it to my queen as well in a pleasant spring.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 December 2019

Another great poem from a great Poet. Beautifully crafted and conveyed. Very perceptive write.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 December 2019

A fantastic poem sir! Beautifully composed....10++++

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 December 2019

A beautiful poem on woman indeed. Loved the way you have poured your thoughts about woman. 'And then started an era of a different stylish love, Bosom on bosom, it was me the player, who gamed', ... is very nice. Thanks for sharing.

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