Wednesday, July 29, 2009

My Concern Comments

Rating: 5.0

Did you ever ask
yourself why?
I'm always in the act
of taking care of you.
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rhona fabi
COMMENTS
Prince Obed de la Cruz 14 September 2009

you have a good one here!

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Ency Bearis 03 August 2009

a nice theme and well aimed...narrated well... just can't comprehend with words like ' soo ' and ' wosrt ' or maybe a suggestion to re phrase your stanza = I don't want to see you feeling hurt Much more to see you worse

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