Sunday, September 6, 2015

My Computer Comments

Rating: 5.0

No need of guns robbers!
Unconditionally I surrender to you,
You may take anything you like,
May be my car, may be my bike.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Luz Hanaii 14 September 2018

I hear you. Yes, our computers are the door to our magical world of poetry and other great entertainments and much knowledge. Best regards!

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Valsa George 08 September 2015

Lovely poem! Yes, I know computer has become an inalienable friend and trustee in your life! Perhaps 'he' may not disclose your 'flirting' to the sick lady, but he might tell it to your children and even grand children. So don't trust your computer friend blindly! A very entertaining write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 September 2015

It is an another gem. Successfully you have presented with attractive diction. Thanks for sharing. .....10

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Khalid Saifullah 06 September 2015

What a gratitude to a friend of billions....................................10

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