My Companion Comments

Asif you have painted a bleak picture here and it is very explicit in the way it is portrayed. I thought the shadow at the end really topped the poem off. Well done! Karin Anderson

wonderful write! ! ! ! ! seems like the aftermath of a war, the destruction and pain of lost love, when we are in love everything trivial seems beautiful, but when the lost is lost even the most beautiful things fail to amuse......you have brought out the pain and disappointment in the most touching way......10!

Wow! Lovely yar.. keep doing yer gud work..

This is amazing! ! Itz perfect...i wouldnt change a thing...and this is true...it happens out there...and you captured the feeling awesomely! ...keep on writing and take care.. Maryam

All flowers has been burned and rainbows turned to gloom the shadows are my only companion my lover till I'm doomed Nothing has burned and no rainbows turned to gloom cos all are but shadows ++++++++10 anjali

We are doomed from the day of eternity.