My Comment On Kelly Kurt's Poem A Few Minutes Ago Poem by Akhtar Jawad

My Comment On Kelly Kurt's Poem A Few Minutes Ago

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I was dwelling in a four dimensional seen universe
recording you beauty in my cell phone.
I came back to my room in the hotel
lying on my bed I played the video
I saw only three dimensions in the video
The fourth dimension was missing
but I saw it again same night in my dreams
So it's only my heart that can record the fourth dimension.

Sunday, August 5, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: human brain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 08 August 2018

excellent thoughtful comment- I was dwelling in a four dimensional seen universe ............. but I saw it again same night in my dreams So it's only my heart that can record the fourth dimension. /// vote//10+++++++++++

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Kelly Kurt 06 August 2018

The fourth dimension is time. Perceived subjectively by most.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 August 2018

The fourth dimension was missing but I saw it again same night in my dreams So it's only my heart that can record the fourth dimension. very good poem.. the activitiy of the human brain. and brain rules us in every way.. thank u dear Akhtar........ tony

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Khalida Bano Ali 06 August 2018

God can be felt with a heart that is not merely a blood pumping device.

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Rini Shibu 05 August 2018

Fourth dimension of heart.. Interesting poem

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