My Comment Gets A Raise Poem by me poet yeps poet

My Comment Gets A Raise

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The twilight
of my life
be the birth
of another
awesome morn
across the wild oceans
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what light
it will be
I can't yet see
let a newer dawn
once again
awaken me
will poets ye

Thursday, October 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: appreciation,commentary,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It elates my heart when I see someone has quoted my poetry So my heart beats faster and passion builds up who that lover could be wanting to kiss PP MEcanhe be a she or she be a he
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 01 November 2019

Hope is eternal and a hopeful heart never dies as long as there are dreams of new dawns.

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 October 2019

Muse, Writing, Poems and comments. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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