My Combustable Heart Comments
If you decide to turn from my combustable heart
And the cinders of my words let loose,
remember I had to burn the burden of this noose;
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...If you decide to turn from my combustable heart And the cinders of my words let loose, remember I had to burn the burden of this noose; To set myself free To set myself free. To set ourselves free... To set ourselves free Mimi, I loved this one, esp. the repetition of the main theme... it's like a warning, letting him know that your heart burns yet, can consume all without a second thought... Brilliant! Great Ink! ; -) -Kelly.
...If you decide to turn from my combustable heart And the cinders of my words let loose, remember I had to burn the burden of this noose; To set myself free To set myself free. To set ourselves free... To set ourselves free Mimi, I loved this one, esp. the repetition of the main theme... it's like a warning, letting him know that your heart burns yet, can consume all without a second thought... Brilliant! Great Ink! ; -) -Kelly.
...If you decide to turn from my combustable heart And the cinders of my words let loose, remember I had to burn the burden of this noose; To set myself free To set myself free. To set ourselves free... To set ourselves free Mimi, I loved this one, esp. the repetition of the main theme... it's like a warning, letting him know that your heart burns yet, can consume all without a second thought... Brilliant! Great Ink! ; -) -Kelly.
pointed and focused like a targeted weapon.... fearless, fearsome, from the hip.....wild west message someone...hey listen... :) nice write..liked it sat
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...If you decide to turn from my combustable heart And the cinders of my words let loose, remember I had to burn the burden of this noose; To set myself free To set myself free. To set ourselves free... To set ourselves free Mimi, I loved this one, esp. the repetition of the main theme... it's like a warning, letting him know that your heart burns yet, can consume all without a second thought... Brilliant! Great Ink! ; -) -Kelly.