My Collar Comments

Wonderful poem, Akhtar Sahab. As Poetess Rose has written, it is a very perceptive poem. I liked the way how through the collar many thoughts and emotions flow like a gentle stream. Admirable.......10

An average or below average if I am sometimes stupid, Just admire a pink woman I shall never try to be a Cupid. Nice lines.

This poem shows how a man must lead his life. We should have our own thoughts and the ability and confidence to speak the merits of these thoughts. Brilliantly penned. On to my Poem List.

Another wonderful and perceptive write, Sir Akhtar. A very humbling write. When we know ourselves that we never stepped on the rights of others and we are confident that we are doing things the right way, never used others to climb the ladder or just depend on others to make us happy then we can write this marvelous poem.

allegorical // I enjoyed