Monday, July 24, 2006

My Coffin Is My Comfort Comments

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When day becomes night
its time to feed to survive,
Feeding on our cattle
that you would call life.
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Gary McPhail
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Preeti - is here! 28 July 2006

I can see it all..its almost real....nice job here! Preets

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Francesca Johnson 24 July 2006

Quite a graphic description of a vampire sinking its fangs (into the neck?) and feeding while the 'moon is my sun.' Another of our young poets showing real promise. Well done, Gary. Love, Fran xx

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