My Coat Comments

nice poem, can be polished further; but congrats on being poet of the day!

Heartiest Congrats for the Poem of the Day recognition to the amazing feelings and emotions for the one of the dearest things- the old coat, woven in form of a beautiful poem.

torn coat...hollowed eyed.......metaphors are...catching....... thanks with congratulation..

Congrats for the member's poem of the day.......

Torn from too many falls in life! Nice work.

there is such a desolate air to this write.... it suggests to me one who does not expect anything other than another pitfall...tyvm karen

Depressing feeling I get here from these words. It works for me Jack. A cold shadow casts me forward as a flame consumes the wick. Nice line, rather inspirational. Keep up the good work.

I liked it to Jack. I read it for the title and I'm glad I did. One of your best. S.

I remember an identical poem. most probably it is composed by a great poet.

a really great poem - your descriptions in this one is really great!

A good coat is a good friend in a lonely world I liked this one a lot