My Cloud Comments

This is a wonderfully expressive poem, BIMBF, one that is quite well phrased and evokes superb imagery in nearly every line. It tells a charming story of a special place that you have, and that many of us have though we may call it by another name, that allows of the sanctuary of our memories to be rekindled almost before our eyes. I think your two final lines in this beautiful poem were quite outstanding. Carl.