Friday, May 26, 2006

My Clean Guilty Conscience Comments

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tender feet do follow the path,
of decisions choice and the aftermath,
we stumble through life, on collision course,
following the river, right from source,
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Phil Whittaker
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Gabriella Franco 10 September 2006

nice poem describin' the ups n downs of life. like it a lot. lalalalalovely. \\keep it real// Gabriella

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Dana Tyrrell 31 May 2006

it has a nice rhyme shceme. kinda like 'knick-knak, paddy-whack' it also carries a good message of persistance

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