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This is my first poem that I wrote for my class and you guessed it, it's about my class.
I see the young woman who lived with nuns
and lived to tell about it. The story she tells, has
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Heartfelt sentiment here, Jacques. Only thing is it reads like prose rather than poetry. I would like you to revise it with shorter lines and remove all superfluous words that will not change the poem itself but will serve to tighten it up. Hope this helps. diva
Alfredo, a lovely poem about people, classmates. Good stuff. Keep writing my friend. David
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7/18/2025 2:14:54 PM # 1.0.0
Very interesting, with some lovely line/word combinations. -chuck