My Circus Show Comments

We all know that the life is like the circus... But you described your circus in a good way and added your special touch. Well penned! !

you are a poet be ma3nal kalema! ! ! not like us we a re playing...but you are really a poet your words can tell that your poetic expressions are wonderful! ! ! i'm very proud of you....spread your self! !

yeah. that's true... nicely written Mohammed.. thanks for sharing such cool poetry...

sweetness! ! :) I like the way you write! ! :)

it's a very nice poem, i like it..keep writing.

It is a nice piece for a thought.

its a nice and a sweet poem on circus type of life 10

it's my circus show that proclaims in me I tell you how it goes to take off and flee.....life is great circus in which we all have play oyr part and leave this worldat destined time.. this is how it goes onwith sad or happy part.. well done and keep it up....10 read mine.....no to sorrow... cuckoo... great circus....visiting hell

Well penned, Mohammed, very deep in essence, as you can see, our lives sometimes become a real circus, one way or another, and we all are clowns with smiling face without the audience realizing or noticing our broken hearts...great work, you got my vote 10+, Love and Peace, brother