Friday, February 3, 2017

My Cigarette And I Comments

Rating: 4.5

I wouldn't know how a single puff feels,
When he draws it from his lips.
Half the time,
I envy the damn cigarette.
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Renee Wangwe
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Daniel Jones 11 April 2017

very much like the analogy of the ciggarette being caressed and loved, it not being aware of the smoker needing it more as it ends, very nice poem Renee, i like your style in this one very much. well deserved vote.

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The feeling of having cigarette is nicely expressed, But the nicotine, alchahol gets closer to the people who smoke or drink. Nice poem.

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