Sunday, May 6, 2007

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Rating: 5.0

Today I thought I really must
Sit down and write a poem,
I had no topic in my mind
Just lounging here at home,
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Linda Ori
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Linda... this is wonderfully comforting, thoughtful, and kind. The inspiration that comes of no inspiration, huh? That last line is a memorable corker. Lovely, flowing piece that reflects a heart of gold. t x

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Alison Cassidy 02 June 2007

This reflective piece is a beautiful affirmation of how lucky we all are to live where we live to love whom we love and make the choices we do, good and bad. I applaud your words, Linda and your commitment to 'live what you believe'. You have inspired me today - and many others too, I am sure. As usual, your words are prettily penned and wise. love, Allie xxxx

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Chuck Audette 17 May 2007

a classy message wrapped with a rhyming ribbon. -chuck

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Barry Van Allen 12 May 2007

Linda, That was very beautiful ... but, did you? B.V.A.

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David Harris 10 May 2007

Linda, wise words and so beautifully written. I agree with Jim about the flow being smooth and the rhythmic flow. It had that lovely compelling attitude to it that just dragged you along to read it until the end. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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Not a member No 4 08 May 2007

Yeah, this is trickery of some sort, but very impressive trickery indeed, and the vehicle serves its purpose well: as usual the flow is so smooth and rhythmic and the language so accessible that the reader is through it in no time without a single stumble! And in addition it has wise content in spades. Another Linda Ori Masterpiece. The best to you, jim xxx

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Beautiful verse for someone who has not been exercising her God-Given literary skills lately....Hmmmmm...I think we've been scammed, here, somehow, in some way.....But i'll give ya' a pass on it this time, Midnight, as work this good is worth the wait! but, don't think we're going to let you make a habit of it! lol! FjR

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