Sitting within the comforts
My home offered me,
I wondered if I really
Ought to take this chance.
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I like how you broke it down. Felt a good build up too it, definitely a powerful read: ]
choices are the foundation of this very empire we call life some are easier than other and some we with we never made but in the end they all contribute to making us a better person later in life. nice one Emily
I like people who make bold choices, following their ideals and beliefs. As long as we consciously try to execute our bold plans with the grace of Ghandi, the wisdom of Martin Luther King Jr. and the love of a mother, we will never go wrong. Very well written, truly admiring what is expressed in the poem.
Nice angle to look at the life. A wise share us always these ideas to make our life at least to a positive approach of living. This poem touches the height when it begins to search the light of destiny through the dark. Carry on....
nice one keep e fire burning....what a brilliant poem..excellent