My Children, His Children, Our Children. Comments

When lovers are dating especially those with children, there is a tendency to hide the truth about their relationship with the ex or baby daddies/mummies and what happens is what you have written here Rose but to both parties. A 10 for your courage in this.

Great choice of words. It is so real, it is happening. Thanks for sharing.

Thanks for reading and jotting down your comments-the sad reality we face in the modern society...too many skeletons in the cupboards can ruin what was expected to be a happy union, its becoming a vermin hence the need for full disclosure for either sex/gender...

Great choice of words on a sensitive topic that the majority would rather never talk about.

You have brought out the moral decadence in a marriage not well thought about, created the scenario of a typical 'modern day' union. I like the question you pose at the end? Great work Rose.

Rose, where do you really get your words from to bring out sensitive issues? you give us wings of courage to dedicate your poems where we cannot master the courage...Good piece and a 10 score from me.Keep up to the great work poetess

A true picture of the present society has been depicted nicely though it is sad. Thanks for sharing.

Rose i really like this poem.You have brought critical issues that we fail to address when seeking suitors-children. Your have carefully chosen your words and brought out the message tactfully. Thanks for sharing, i am sure it will inspire many who are looking for spouses.

Wow, this is sad. Very complicated yet common these days. Choices we make sometimes in haste have consequences that keep rippling out and affecting all around us. Good poem!

Where did we go wrong in making our choices? My children, your children, our children have robbed us joy good question