Saturday, November 8, 2014

My Childhood Poem16 Comments

Rating: 4.5

Fear and sorrow
My life-time companions everyday
They exist today an' will tomorrow
Day and night with me they stay.
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Lyn Paul 05 January 2015

Admire your strength and how you have pieced these heartfelt words together. Survival is the only way to cope. You have this! Keep up the beautiful writing.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 December 2014

Feelings and fears of a teenager nicely penned...10

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Mohammad Muzzammil 16 November 2014

A series of childhood has an account of each and every moment. Really nice write

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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 November 2014

Your all series of childhood poems are really excellent works. Thoughtful and valuable really. Nice job done.

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Amitava Sur 14 November 2014

A thoughtful write by a soulful heart. A lovely confession about the pains experienced in reality. Thanks for sharing. My heart stands by your side, dear.

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Heather Wilkins 13 November 2014

soulful heart, your childhood poems are very touching and clever great work

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Valsa George 12 November 2014

A very touching write.... the shock of a teenager as she steps into a world of harsh realities from a world of fairy tales and magic wands! It is felt in every line!

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Matthias Pantaleon 09 November 2014

Quiet an interesting read. But I was hoping you could re-arrange the lines. Its not properly arrange and could be mistaken for a prose. But like I said, its an interesting piece!

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