My Childhood Poem 19 Comments

Can you share original ballad in Telugu?

Congratulations on this poem being selected Member POD. GOOD POEM, " If you can't come ashore, I will come to you my dear....'

Wonderful poem x Congratulations on member poem of the day. Very well deserved.

A nice, poetic depiction of an eternal waiting. Loved the poem.

A nice poetic imagination, Heart. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.

great written, ..wonderful..and nice to read..

Growing up and Facing the problems of life. Nice work

great write loved much

Nicely done. Thanks for sharing

Wow u did a great job if translating which I know is not an easy task. It id an appealing impressive poem poetic and beautifully soulful. Kudos for the lovely rhyming too. Great to read u again.

With beautiful imagery about the terrible loss of her beloved as she waits for him along the shore with a wonderful ending!

The story of this eternal wait by the girl for her lover is told in simple language! At the end the girl is rewarded by a strange union of a celestial kind! Enjoyed the poem!

A sad yet very beautiful ballad. Thank you