My Childhood Comments

Yes Amir, no matter how tough and difficult a childhood has been, we will always remember it as the best part of our life. Great poem, very eloquently composed. Ingeborg von Finsterwalde

i love it....absolutely amazing

A comparative poem distinguishing the childhood and adulthood.Loved reading the poem

Childhood was much more simple Nice poem, Amir Peace

I can identify with you. Revisiting my childhoods a favorite pastime. It gives such joy an assurance, especially in these times. A peaceful, nostalgic poem.

Though I do not miss my childhood Amir, I still feel the longing in this writing. Beautifully expressed :)

and my only pain was my injured knee not a broken heart like these days........... So very true! I love these lines! A very realistic picture you have drawn of your childhood... Childhood is a time when we often cry over our injured limbs... Then we never knew the aches of an wounded heart! It was a time when when we had no enemies, but the sibling jealousy made us see our brothers and sisters as rivals...! You have an innate flair for writing... With practise, you can grow into a real promise... Best of luck Amir!

childhood is the beautiful days of life which will never b back.A beautiful poem

childhood is the beautiful days of life which will never b back.A beautiful poem

Your feelings are so good. try to develop your metaphor and keep writing. you have real poetic nature. day by day it will be better.. keep penning and ponder my dear bro Amir Mohammad...

Your poem expresses feelings and it is good. You could try to rhyme your poems with a kind of rhythm. Keep writing, you are on your way to writing great poems.

easy flow of mind speak of a bygone time.

I life the theme of this poem. The sad truth when we lose our childhood.