Wednesday, June 3, 2009

My Child Within My Arms Comments

Rating: 5.0

Would you have my eyes of blue
My nose, my chin, my hair?
And would I recognise that smile
Upon your face so fair?
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Duncan Wyllie 31 July 2009

You say that you want to be a father, , , so then let me tell you that, , as a father you have every quality worthy of such a gift, , and also...you have blessed many a person young and old when they feel the paasion that you write with, , , amazing words and strong feelings in this beautiful write Andrew... QUALITY * Love duncan X

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Sandra Martyres 03 June 2009

Beautiful, a dad's yearning to hold his child in his arms...lovely piece Andrew

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Tsira Goge 03 June 2009

Andrew, Very warm the poem, man's tenderness here is amazingly beautiful...10....... Kindest regards, Tsira

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Ramesh T A 03 June 2009

A nice song of father to his child in hand!

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