My Child Comments

Sir you are very clever And thinking whatever You are always thinking And poems making

Bursting with a beauty that could only come from a loving father. Abdulrazak Aralimatti I celebrate with you the singular joy of fatherhood in general and fathering daughters in particular! Well done!

Lucky your daughter for having such a father! Only one thing, the third line sounds curious! Ascend from heaven?

Beautiful write. Such love in your poem for your daughter......10

Excellent work! Really I enjoyed it. Lovely words used this poem. So, a lot of thanks to you. Be well always.

song of the heart of a proud and happy father! ! gave 10

Well dedicated to your daughter, by grace of god, she will make your dreams true sir.

Such beautiful words were used for the creation of the poem. 10+++

Zakiya. born on 7 February - lovely dedication from a proud father!

This is so beautiful, being a mother of 2 daughters I can relate to this poem. May your daughter be a source of constant happiness for you.

A very beautiful short poem coming straight out of an affectionate father's heart. May Allah bless Zakiya, you and your family. (10)

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this wonderful tribute to your lovely daughter! It does the heart good to know there are fathers like you who love their children with all their hearts and are not afraid to show it. Well done, you sir, are a fine example for other men to follow! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Fatherly love well expressed, A proud Poet father.............10

She is my first child, Innocent, holy and mild. After reading the above lines of the poem, we feel like sending our best wishes to the proud father of such a lovely lovely daughter and blessings to the daughter herself. May God shower all His divine bounties on this adorable family. Thanks for the poem.

I know she will smile large when she reads this in years to come...So so beautiful.....

How divine! A beautiful verse, your heart speaking! Dorothy A. Holmes A Poet Who Loves To Sing

I was so happy to read this poem. A have spilled the entire affection and love of a father in these beautiful lines. Loved it. Let her always be blessed.

A sweet poem where the love and the fatherly affection for a baby is expressed. This love from both side makes the family happy and humanity moves forward for a better tomorrow.

A lovely write full of fatherly affection for the little one! Yes, children give meaning and beauty to our lives!

A wonderful poem straight from the heart. Loved it.