Wednesday, July 29, 2015

My Child Comments

Rating: 5.0

Zakiya, my dear daughter,
Pleases me with loud laughter.
She ascended from high heaven,
On February seven.
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti
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Fahad shaikh 05 September 2019

Sir you are very clever And thinking whatever You are always thinking And poems making

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Bursting with a beauty that could only come from a loving father. Abdulrazak Aralimatti I celebrate with you the singular joy of fatherhood in general and fathering daughters in particular! Well done!

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Afrooz Jafarinoor 31 December 2015

Lucky your daughter for having such a father! Only one thing, the third line sounds curious! Ascend from heaven?

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Simone Inez Harriman 29 November 2015

Beautiful write. Such love in your poem for your daughter......10

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Shahin Latif 23 November 2015

Excellent work! Really I enjoyed it. Lovely words used this poem. So, a lot of thanks to you. Be well always.

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Bakuli Bhakali 05 November 2015

song of the heart of a proud and happy father! ! gave 10

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Well dedicated to your daughter, by grace of god, she will make your dreams true sir.

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Agatha Eliza 16 October 2015

Such beautiful words were used for the creation of the poem. 10+++

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Liza Sudina 14 October 2015

Zakiya. born on 7 February - lovely dedication from a proud father!

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Seema Chowdhury 13 October 2015

This is so beautiful, being a mother of 2 daughters I can relate to this poem. May your daughter be a source of constant happiness for you.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 08 October 2015

A very beautiful short poem coming straight out of an affectionate father's heart. May Allah bless Zakiya, you and your family. (10)

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Roseann Shawiak 28 September 2015

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this wonderful tribute to your lovely daughter! It does the heart good to know there are fathers like you who love their children with all their hearts and are not afraid to show it. Well done, you sir, are a fine example for other men to follow! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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M Asim Nehal 25 September 2015

Fatherly love well expressed, A proud Poet father.............10

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Rajnish Manga 24 September 2015

She is my first child, Innocent, holy and mild. After reading the above lines of the poem, we feel like sending our best wishes to the proud father of such a lovely lovely daughter and blessings to the daughter herself. May God shower all His divine bounties on this adorable family. Thanks for the poem.

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Melvina Germain 20 September 2015

I know she will smile large when she reads this in years to come...So so beautiful.....

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 18 September 2015

How divine! A beautiful verse, your heart speaking! Dorothy A. Holmes A Poet Who Loves To Sing

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 07 September 2015

I was so happy to read this poem. A have spilled the entire affection and love of a father in these beautiful lines. Loved it. Let her always be blessed.

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Amitava Sur 27 August 2015

A sweet poem where the love and the fatherly affection for a baby is expressed. This love from both side makes the family happy and humanity moves forward for a better tomorrow.

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Valsa George 06 August 2015

A lovely write full of fatherly affection for the little one! Yes, children give meaning and beauty to our lives!

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Rajesh Thankappan 30 July 2015

A wonderful poem straight from the heart. Loved it.

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