I wanted to tell you
how it is that I love you
it used to be so easy
I'd pick up a pen
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it is case of addiction inteperate needs complete care and attetion to the reek of time depressioon........beautifully depicted, i enjoy, well penned, thanks LEE
Great poem. I like this one lots, can relate well. -Kylie M. Lynch
I hope that this is just your muse speaking, Lee? Frustrations and thwarted dreams lead many to despair, but a chemical romance...nah! I find that the tried and tested method of standing on top of a hill and shouting (or screaming would be more fitting for the fairer sex) helps a lot...but then I lost my voice once, and needed medication :) Great expression of a modern malady. Keep smiling...you have friends! jack :)
Lee I know how it feels, sad situations&alienation are the plagues of our century. Great poemo depicting the situation... All the best Roger
Like Chuck says, it strikes a chord (and seems to be even more prevalent amongst poets!) . I can relate to this Lee, great write. Hugs Anna xxx
Strikes a chord with many of us, I'm sure. And we can't be sure what the cure is or even what the cause of the problem is, as our world just gets more and more toxic...-chuck
A harrowing tale well told. Brims with frustration. Patrick
This is excellent lee. You've really captured the 'not quite with it' quality that these so called 'legitimate' drugs induce. (And it's amazing how many are prescribed each year too) . I gather you've stopped taking them - otherwise you couldn't have written this. 'Lifeless circles of day and night' is great, as is your conclusion. Good strong penning. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥