Thursday, December 8, 2011

My Cheers Comments

Rating: 5.0

With this life I am going,
The pain only grows,
Yet the pain has become anger,
So it's less my emotion shows,
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Joshua Hillard
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Silentpoet Grl 08 December 2011

Sad poem - written beautifully - every line full of emotion ... 'where did I go wrong? ' a question that can be so haunting... and sometimes its not even that one went 'wrong' it might have just been the path meant to be taken... But, this is truly a wonderful poem...

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Joshua Hillard

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