Wednesday, August 1, 2012

My Charming Bride Comments

Rating: 5.0

She is
My charming bride;
Births of yore
Saw us together,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 02 August 2012

nice poem. but lot of sugar. I thought it was going to end, such a long poem on his love of life. PK. Any way full mark for you.

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