Wednesday, March 30, 2011

My Cemetery Days Comments

Rating: 5.0

In an old cemetery by the sea,
I buried my father
then they buried me
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buried alive
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Laurie Van Der Hart 19 April 2017

I like this poem, despite it's morbidity. It has a peaceful loneliness about it. I love the lines windswept waves/ of rolling grass/ beneath the clouds/ by a sea of glass. Can really picture it.

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K J 05 June 2011

You think you will die lonely and forgotten. Well it is better than false people visiting your grave just for the heck of it, just to show to people that they cared about you. Better lie still in your grave without those false emotions affecting you. Better to die lonely and forgotten, atleast you will not be remebered by any, atleast you will not trouble anybody else even after your death.

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