There was declension
In my eye's vision
It was soon detected
As cataract, age-related.
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A great way you have presented these words. Though I did cringe a little. Frightening to have a needle in the eye. Thank you
The cataract operation vividly explained. Speedy recovery and welcome back to poetry.
You took your readers through the entire process of the surgery! The pre and post operative tests when narrated with a slight sense of humour has made the poem more appealing! Enjoyed the whole poem! As usual your poem is rich with details that one can learn all about the subject you handle.....!
i hope u have narrated ur own story...n u r doing well now....... a great write as usual
Thanks to all my poet friends for their kind appreciation. And my dear Kavya as you surmised it is my own story versified. I am doing well now. THANKS.