Wednesday, August 13, 2014

My Castle Comments

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Ah ! why have I built my Castle
On the shifting golden sand?
On the shores of the hungry ocean
Instead of the safe highland?
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Radclyffe Hall
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Michael Morgan 13 August 2014

To ditch 'live' in the third stanza would improve the meter and simplify the thought- both worthy goals. MM

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Radclyffe Hall

Radclyffe Hall

Bournemouth, Hampshire
Radclyffe Hall
Radclyffe Hall
Bournemouth, Hampshire
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