Monday, December 1, 2008

My Car Accident Comments

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Driving on a cold winter night,
drove with tears drowning my sight.
Didnt know where to turn
Drove into a ditch and felt a burn.
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millie st.claire
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Serenity Prayer 23 December 2008

i heard bout your car accident, i hope your ok. i love this poem. i have my lisceance now, i dont know if you knew that or not. alot has happened and ive been wondering lately if i were to get into a car accident, would my ex even care. i honestly doubt he would. i think that itd be like this poem. great job though. i hope youre ok. =)

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Jay Boyd 11 December 2008

nice poem. very emotional and deep

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We're going to get through it Millie! ! ! ...Beautiful write! ! <33 Payyton

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Joseph Poewhit 01 December 2008

Hard shot of reality brings out truths

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Min Sia 01 December 2008

So sad..but revealing..the realization..the opening of one's mind... Great concept..Words flowing through...Fine imagery..very captivating. Great poem!

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