Thursday, November 18, 2004

My Butterfly Comments

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Some time ago,
while on my run
I came to the old weir.
And, as I passed
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Reshma Ramesh 08 February 2009

haha! ! what a write..............how sensitive and warm your heart is.....to notice these tiny creations of god.......well penned sir

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Herbert Nehrlich1 18 November 2004

actually, what bugs me the most is that, in all those 100 days I never thought to check! Figured such beauty had to be female! So Allan, if you would be so kind? You will need tweezers, magnifying glass, bright lights, patience and an understanding heart. But if it's a he, you can keep him.

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. . 18 November 2004

Maybe you should switch to ladybugs...but you didn't hear that from me... ;) .......and she fly's away......

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Herbert Nehrlich1 18 November 2004

Thanks Allan, although I had been under the impression that she was spoken for due to our 100 days of attention and affection. But, as I have said before: ' A butterfly is a fly that flutters by'. I guess this news beats hearing about a truck windscreen or butterflies in some stomach...

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Allan James Saywell 18 November 2004

Dont worry mate she's at my house, i love feel good poem's with just a touch of sadness nice poem herbert AJS

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