Tuesday, March 24, 2015

My Butterfly Comments

Rating: 5.0

Amazing,
She says you have stars in a blue back ground,
And I have flowers in a green back ground.
Your stars don't become fruits,
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Sarmad Mirza 29 March 2015

Sweet and beautiful........................10

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Hazel Durham 26 March 2015

A butterfly is a symbol of youth running free with vivid colours of opportunities that are just waiting for youth to embrace, the butterfly is in our souls all we have to do is let our imagination run free that will release our inner butterfly! Beautiful, inspired write!

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Mark Heathcote 25 March 2015

Nice poem enjoyed this read thanks for sharing.

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Bisma Mirza 25 March 2015

Beautiful Poem..... Awesome...10 on 10

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Valsa George 25 March 2015

This is indeed lovely! That butterfly has not flown away! It is in your mind! Perhaps your weak body may not be able to travel everywhere, but the butterfly hidden inside will lift you up on its wings and take you to imagination's higest peaks as seen here! Thank you for this generous acknowledgement! I feel honoured!

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Khalida Bano Ali 24 March 2015

It's beautiful and lovely.................10

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