Thursday, February 9, 2006
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Warm breezy day
Gazing standing opposite
At St.peter's school
Morning 8.30am
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Solomon Brook
09 February 2006
There are some gems in this poem. Well done. English grammer is challenging when it isn't native. But your effort is respected, and noted. Keep up the good work.
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7/29/2025 7:01:30 AM # 1.0.0
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