Monday, October 19, 2009

My Burning Heart Comments

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As i lay awake tonight because i can't sleep i wanna be with you
if you was beside me i loveing kiss u.
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christian guice
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Romeo Della Valle 19 October 2009

Dear Christian, you got the heart, you got the meanings and honestly you got to learn the ways, say all, what you want to say from the heart, but nevertheless, say in a poetic way, whether is a rhythm or not, as long as you get your message across, we learn from one another, I was there when I started, please, read some of my poems, and you will see, you are in the right track, you got my vote, well penned, feelings are feelings nevertheless, Love and Peace, Romeo

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