Thursday, October 5, 2017

My Brother Taught Me Comments

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He taught me how to run, oh yes
From the time that I could walk
And other plans he had for me
Just as soon as I could talk.
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Marilyn Lott
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Rajnish Manga 06 October 2017

This is next in the sequence of the earlier poem 'My Brother's Love'. It's lovely to recall those days when you were guided and helped by your brother at every step. Thanks.

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Marilyn Lott 06 October 2017

Thank you, Rajinish, so much. I have other poems about him when he got sick, went into a coma and died. It was not good the way it ended. A Lost Mind; My Brother Has Cancer; and My Brother's Gone are other poems I wrote for him or about him. I do so appreciate your nice comments.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 06 October 2017

But one day God took him So hard, I miss him so So much my brother taught me I thought you would want to know. Felt sad about the tragic touch so well described. I loved the way you write. Thanks. 10++++

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