Cj Heck

Cj Heck

Born in Columbus OH - living in Florida
Wednesday, October 19, 2005

My Brother's Feet (Children) Comments

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My brother's feet are stinky
and he's hard to sit beside.
Mom makes him take his sneakers off
and leave them. They're outside.
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Raynette Eitel 19 October 2005

this is a good children's poem. They all love to talk about something 'stinky..' I think the last line of the first stanza should have 'there' rather than 'they're.' Raynette

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Cj Heck

Cj Heck

Born in Columbus OH - living in Florida
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