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The sight of forsaken blood
the sight of deseption runs untold
corps of unforsaken friend lays below
missing til no end
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More! More! More! that was amazing. you really captured me with that poem.
wow that's intense i can relate i love it :)
This would have to be my favorite poem of yours I love the emotion you put into it Very sad but I enjoyed reading it :)
You can feel the undercurrent of anger/disappointment/depression. Comes across real well. Also, people, if you're going to comment specifically using your own life, EXPLAIN. Otherwise, dropp it.
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7/28/2025 5:08:40 AM # 1.0.0
i love this poem it is so deep the best one i have read so far... love it to death