Wednesday, October 10, 2007

My Brother Part -Ii(Read My Brother Part-I Frst) Comments

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After I returned from the nursing home,
My Bumped head looked like a dome..
My Brother not giving me a moment of peace,
Started jumping around me like a tease,
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Baidurya Mukherjee
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Subbaraman N V 12 December 2007

Good! God bless you for all your good thoughts, words and deeds!

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David Harris 02 December 2007

Baidurya, this is cute. Good second part. Great poem and imagery. Top marks my friend and thanks for sharing it. David

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