Monday, January 14, 2008

My Brother, A Sister And Me Comments

Rating: 4.8

She’s lying on the bed, comatose
No familiar faces around, she could stare
Ironic, there was a smell of calitos
Rising up breezily into the air
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
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that was extremely touching and sad poem., ..

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John Dylan 26 January 2008

You utilize the english laguage differently than I do. It is refreshing

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This is very strong, powerful poetry. I was moved.

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