My Brother Comments

In this short poem dedicated to your little brother you have poured out your intense feelings towards him. A loving elder sister is a great for any brother and I hope you will continue to have the same intimacy all throughout your lives and let yourself be his caretaker at times. I enjoyed reading this poem. I am sure your little brother does not venture into sea to play with any live dolphin at all. Keep writing dear Hira Akhtar.

its so nice poem HIRA. i also have two brothers but unfortunately they are are older than me.i really think that having a younger brother is ASWOUME. God has given you a very beautifull gift. always do care of him :) fatima

it is a nice description of a little brother and a brother-sister relationship. i like rhyming in poems, though non-rhyming poems are often very nice as well. i think you are reaching almost too much for a rhyme when you use dolphin; it is a good rhyme, but i wonder if the statement is believable. also, some of the rhymes seem halfway between being rhymes and not being rhymes. but, ok. i especially enjoyed reading: Always he likes to wear new clothes On his birthday when candles he blows thanks for sharing.

So sweeeettt... He is really a king of the kings c0z he has a sister like u, Keep it up, Bright morn