Wednesday, September 14, 2011

My Broken Wings Comments

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my wings where broken thay where turning
in to dust
then you came and lefted them up
i cry and cry
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danyelle tedrow
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Bloodied Heart 21 October 2011

I know what your friend was going through so I fully understand this peom. I am glade you made this, the darkness seems to hang on a little while longer but now I can understand it more. I will do my best to make more poems... Thnx fer the poem! hope to read more~!

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Crimson Love 21 October 2011

Beautiful poem, your friend is lucky to be able to call you friend, truly amazing poem! :)

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hey danyelle i read this poem. i have been in the dark 4 a while and stiull am. i can see the light little by little but i am still workin my way theough it with friends by my side and a wonderful bf as well as others who axtually love and care about me. as i read this poem it really did bring tears to my eyes. this poem has so much emotion,4 otherrs may not undeerstand it or may think its simple and dumb but until you go through what i am and many others go through as well as seriously hit rock bottom no one on earth will understand it to the poit they would tear up like did. thank you so unbelievaby much. you really did help e and pyush me not to give up.

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