My Broken Sleep Poem by Vaibhav Pandey

My Broken Sleep

Rating: 5.0


Huffed from my broken sleep,
I heard the wall clock tick-tock
like a tumultous streak of sound,
deafening my fickle ears in shock.

I got off the bed all distraught,
carting a frantic state of mind.
And all of a sudden saw heaven
through my window to unwind.

Awe followed the rude awakening
to the nature's mystic sight.
The beauteous scenario was enhanced
by the magic of the moonlight.

I thought it couldn't have gone better,
Yet it did to my surprise.
A mellifluous song came sailing with
the pouring of rain filled skies.

The trees were not left behind too,
They also played their part.
Swaying to the song of the nature
with the rhythm of heaven's heart.

From the dull sight of my ragged room
to the sheer musical joy.
My mind once felt so exhausted
found new wings to fly.

Then I lay down on my bed and
closed my quenched eyes,
And my sleep that was once broken
got mended by nature's lullabies...


Thanks to Carl Harris and Sathyanarayana MVS

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shashendra Amalshan 08 September 2009

this is a wonderful poem.... Last part of the poem is very soothing to the mind.. Hey Vaibav, you usually don't write these kinda stuff na.... But this is good.. always love reading these type of poems.. good.. 10 cheers shan

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 September 2009

Awe followed the rude awakening to the nature's mystic sight. The beauteous scenario was enhanced by the magic of the moonlight........................wonderful expression of nature scintillating by florence of beauty moonlit night, and seems to whisper soul awakening from sleep, qute ingenious flow in lucid style of imagery,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Dr Kamran Haider 07 September 2009

Wonderful... I must say Vaibhav this is a perfect write... Flawless imagery... amazing...! ! !

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Seema Aarella 07 September 2009

Beautiful write.....fine words, nice imagery, love the last stanza, perfect ending! ! thanks for sharing Vaibhav, its been a pleasurable read!

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Surya . 07 September 2009

deep sleep and wondeful awakening.nice poem. voted10 surya

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moribund love 24 October 2009

beauty flowing everywhere.10+

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Catrina Heart 15 September 2009

From the rude awakenings and slashes of fate we have kits and kins to cuddle us, peers to cheer us and keep us away from the dark stromy weather.......10+++++++++

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Rup Pokharel 13 September 2009

Good to read your broken sleep. I liked it do give more of the type.! 10+++++

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Lynda Robson 11 September 2009

Nice poem Vaibhav, the beautiful sight you saw was worth being awake for, 10 Lynda x

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Lady Grace 09 September 2009

oh..what a nice poem..i appreciate the thought you expressed here..

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