Saturday, June 5, 2004

My Broken Leaf Comments

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Thy now I stand with grief,
the pain has shook my heart,
I am a tree without a leaf,
all the roots drained, I have no part.
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Helgard du Preez
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Aram Stefanian 01 March 2005

Great poem, Helgard Congratulations!

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Camacy Melville 27 February 2005

I liked your poem it was simple and nice.keep writing :)

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Helgard Du Preez 13 February 2005

Well, Herbert it seems like you like demorilizing almost everyone's spirit's on here. Your comment doesn't bring me down. I'm not really a poet at all, i posted it here to join this community and enjoy everyone's poems. Besides, the poem has meaning to me, maybe not to you, but thats fine.Your'e comments make no sense, ive read your other comments. Good grieve, hope i don't get to be an old grumpy man like you, you should try to smile a abit, it really helps...

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Herbert Nehrlich1 13 February 2005

And as far as this poem is concerned, wow. If there is anything worthwhile about it I have not found it. H

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Herbert Nehrlich1 13 February 2005

Well Aram, sometimes people who THINK they are poets also think they are critics. The world is full of incompetence.

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Helgard Du Preez 05 February 2005

Thankyou for the very nice comment Aram, it really helps for the next poem: -) Take Care

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Aram Stefanian 05 February 2005

I loved your poem a lot! Really great piece of work! Congratulations! And don't listen to dumb critics! Best wishes! Aram

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Steven Friendly 05 June 2004

The Earth is alive, but speaks without conscience.

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Helgard du Preez

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