Thy now I stand with grief,
the pain has shook my heart,
I am a tree without a leaf,
all the roots drained, I have no part.
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Well, Herbert it seems like you like demorilizing almost everyone's spirit's on here. Your comment doesn't bring me down. I'm not really a poet at all, i posted it here to join this community and enjoy everyone's poems. Besides, the poem has meaning to me, maybe not to you, but thats fine.Your'e comments make no sense, ive read your other comments. Good grieve, hope i don't get to be an old grumpy man like you, you should try to smile a abit, it really helps...
And as far as this poem is concerned, wow. If there is anything worthwhile about it I have not found it. H
Well Aram, sometimes people who THINK they are poets also think they are critics. The world is full of incompetence.
Thankyou for the very nice comment Aram, it really helps for the next poem: -) Take Care
I loved your poem a lot! Really great piece of work! Congratulations! And don't listen to dumb critics! Best wishes! Aram
Great poem, Helgard Congratulations!