Thursday, June 28, 2007

My Broken Heart..............On A Shelf........Why? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes I stop and wonder,
What I saw in you...
Was it in your gentle words?
Or the simplicity in the things you do?
...
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Mahfooz Ali
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Edna Javelosa 28 June 2007

beautifully romantic yet sad..great write! 10

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Malini Kadir 28 June 2007

so touching.......it won't always be like this....cheerup! Some fair dame will touch your flame And sparks will fly, you no longer tame! Todays sorrow eraze away With true love and gentle say! !

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Mahfooz Ali

Mahfooz Ali

Lucknow (U.P.) India
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