Saturday, January 24, 2009

My Broken Heart Comments

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in the dark corners my my broken heart
all alone
the only thing i feel is my tears rolling down my face
all i see is my heart braking even more
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sarah may
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Jessica Robert 20 June 2009

Veryy nice short poem, sorrow is in every verse. Keep up the great writes: D H&K's Jess <33

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very good and simple keep up the great work sarah! -Layla

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