Wednesday, October 15, 2008

My Bro.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Writing down on a piece of paper,
about my sweet, big, naughty brother...

who cares for his sister,
...
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Neha Aradhye
COMMENTS
Amit Gokhale 03 January 2009

:) am glad a bit, but more am proud, to have a sis like you. Remember to keep a bit mercy and not make me more emotional by writing such a beautiful thing for me. Let this emotion be in our eyes, protect it with a password of love, so that no one can read it, it should be only for US Your Bro- Amty Da.

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Cherry Sha 12 December 2008

a very beautiful poem.... bro-sis perhaps are the people who fight the most, but the love they share is incomprehensible....... I am glad that u captured that in words... would like to thank u for doing this.. Lovely! Wish u guys Happiness forever.

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rohit sapra 01 December 2008

This poem is nice as it displays the bond of brother and sister very nicely.

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 01 December 2008

ohhhh very well dedicated and sweet poem.....reallybros are like this........i also love my bro.........good job dear keep writing

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Gargi Saha 18 October 2008

A lovely sweet poem expressing the brother sister relationship.

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Pallvi Sharma 16 October 2008

It's really very cute..short and sweet

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Joe Osullivan 15 October 2008

I like it's honest simplicity

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Neha Aradhye

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